Oh typical me.
I’ve plunged in head first.
I failed to gauge
Your shallow waters.
I did not survey
The rocks in your bed.
So, typical me.
Again in mid-flight.
I now realize
The error in haste.
To have been lured in
By flags colored red.
Woe, typical me.
Landed head first.
I’ve no one to blame
For the state I’m in
Or the cold water
Still trapped in my head.
November 17th, 2014 at 3:15 pm
Hindsight is always 20/20, eh? Good job!
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November 17th, 2014 at 3:22 pm
This is a very impressive verse about falling in love, how silly we feel and yet optimistic at the same time. Very painful but positive! Excellent poem, my friend and blogging buddy! Much love and naked hugs! 😉
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November 17th, 2014 at 7:12 pm
Thank you Roger!
I always enjoy your analytical commentaries.
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November 17th, 2014 at 7:21 pm
I hope as much as I enjoy your words, my friend! 🙂
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November 17th, 2014 at 7:22 pm
An interesting read. I think if we were to avoid that kind of spontaneity, we would lose to much of what makes life so interesting.
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November 17th, 2014 at 7:39 pm
You are absolutely right, my friend.
It is that blind faith that has paved an interesting life for me.
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November 18th, 2014 at 7:12 am
“The rocks in your bed …” I love the way you write, Oscar. I really do.
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November 18th, 2014 at 7:28 am
Thank you, Mark!
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November 18th, 2014 at 2:24 pm
Aren’t we all? Good work and love it! 🙂
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November 18th, 2014 at 3:35 pm
Thank you so much! I love that you love it.
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November 20th, 2014 at 2:27 pm
Reblogged this on garysixtynine.
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December 5th, 2015 at 7:35 am
Nice wordplay !
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December 5th, 2015 at 8:35 am
Thank you! 😊
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December 5th, 2015 at 12:16 pm
Splendid Oscar!
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December 5th, 2015 at 3:18 pm
Gracias, Robert! 😀
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December 6th, 2015 at 8:26 am
I really relate to this as an Aries male.
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December 6th, 2015 at 8:51 am
Glad to hear it resonates with you.
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